My thoughts on Make your Mark chapter 4 by RingTeam, journal
My thoughts on Make your Mark chapter 4
So, there we go. Misty finally got a redemption arc. And it was genuinely well executed and well written. I’m aware it’s a bit too late to talk about chapter 4 when there are many episodes in Make your Mark, but I didn’t have extra time to catch on. I’ve seen some spoilers, but, since I have zero context, I can’t talk about them, so I’m going to talk about chapter 4. The best way to describe this pack of episodes is that it started with the most irrelevant stories and it ended with a bang. Bridlewoodstock was an episode meant to celebrate the 40 years of the My Little Pony franchise, but, for an episode like that, it left much to be desired. It’s very uneventful, it had awkward pacing and it was too long, it’s as long as the season 6 finale of Friendship is Magic. This story could have been more interesting if the Troggles (those nature souls or whatever) weren’t that mentioned, because that had lead to an awkward pacing filled with repetitive warnings. If there was only one
THEY LITERALLY DID WHAT I SAID IN MAKE YOUR MARK!! by RingTeam, journal
THEY LITERALLY DID WHAT I SAID IN MAKE YOUR MARK!!
NOTE: The following images contain spoilers of Make your Mark, from chapter 2 to chapter 4. In April 4th of 2020, when I expressed my displeasure about Starlight Glimmer, I said this: Keep in mind that this was written three years ago. Well, here's what the G5 writers did so far. THANK YOU, HASBRO! I'm super glad that they did this! As someone who wasn't convinced with most redemption stories in G4 in their last 4 seasons, I'm happy that the new writers went to this direction! A direction I suggested three years ago! I can't wait to see the rest of Make your Mark! Holy cow, I like G5!
Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 4 by Eli-J-Brony, literature
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Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 4
Madcord had me tied up in his lair.
Madcord: Now Katswell pony, tell me where the mirror is.
Eli: I'm not a Katswell. And I'll never tell you where the mirror is.
Madcord: You want me to use my spells on you?
Eli: My friends will come and stop you.
Madcord: Not a chance. Now where is the mirror.
Eli: If I told you, you'd use it to enter the other words, and we can't have villains do that.
Meanwhile, Kitty and the others went to see Twilight.
Kitty: So some strange being came out and captured him. We don't know where's he's gone to.
Twilight: Well, I'm sure that with the Elements of Harmony, we can beat him.
Fluttershy: But, how will
Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 3 by Eli-J-Brony, literature
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Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 3
The Cutie-Mark Crusaders took me into their clubhouse.
Apple Bloom: Ya know Eli, you might be a grown-up. But I'm sure we can accept you as a crusader.
Eli: Really?
Apple Bloom: Of course.
Eli: Well you see where I come from, we don't have cutie-marks.
Sweetie Belle: No cutie-marks?
Scootaloo: You mean everypony in your world is a blank flank?
Eli: Hahahaha. Actually, not everyone in my world is a pony. In fact, I'm actually not a pony in my own world. I'm actually a hedgehog. I'm pretty sure Michael has told you about how his family are cats in his world.
Scootaloo: What's the name of your world?
Eli: My home world is Mobius. In fac
Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 2 by Eli-J-Brony, literature
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Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 2
Then a whoosh in the sky happened.
Eli: Is that Rainbow Dash?
Michael: Yes. Hey Rainbow Dash, I have a friend I'd like you to meet.
Rainbow Dash landed.
Rainbow Dash: Don't you mean a couple of friends?
Rainbow Dash was referring to Dudley and Andy. She already knew Kitty cause she had been in Equestria before.
Michael: Oh. Silly me. This is Dudley. My aunt's partner.
Dudley: Hello.
Rainbow Dash: This white pony is your aunt's partner?
Dudley: I'm really a dog. I was turned into a pony when I entered this world.
Rainbow Dash: I see. And who's this? (Pointing to me)
Michael: This is Eli.
Eli: I'm really a hedgehog. And I originally
Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 1 by Eli-J-Brony, literature
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Eli's Adventure in Equestria Part 1
Hello, I'm glad you could make it. I'm about to tell you a story about my adventure in another world. Well I come from Mobius, but I used a portal to get into a Petropolis. But there are portals for about any universe. Well, some friends of mine from Petropolis introduced me to a universe I was very happy to visit. But I had a lot of surprises ahead for me. This is my Adventure in Equestria. Our story starts in Twilight Sparkle's house. My friend, Michael O'Toole in his pony form was visiting with her.
Michael: It's a good thing you got your crown back.
Twilight: Me too. I'm sure glad I made it back home. I do hope Sunset Shimmer is doing O